Saturday, October 13, 2012

Time


Poetry Jam
Monsters


Trusting The Unknown


Time
Magic or Monster

Time marches fast so much of our life,
But sometime it takes hours for a minute to pass.
Is it time or our mind that plays the trick?
Treating us to the unexpected ticks combining?

Waking in the dark is joyful
until
there is no light or sound
for a reference to fill.
NO light at the end of the tunnel.
Time will stand still.
Total dark tricks our mind.
Treating us only with the glimmers returning.

Trusting the unknown
Is the best we can do.
Or 
time will confuse us
to think it is dark.

5 comments:

  1. great take on the prompt!

    thanks for participating at Poetry Jam!


    dani

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  2. Indeed time continues to move on faster and faster! And indeed total dark DOES trick our mind.

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  3. Love this take on the prompt! That never-ending march of time can sure seem like an undefeatable monster! Very nicely done indeed!

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  4. Time is so interesting, and our perception of it...and sometimes it does feel like a monster. Great take on the prompt!

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  5. Time can certainly play tricks with your mind and be a monster. Excellent idea on this prompt!

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