Friday, September 20, 2013

No Time To Fight

Poetry Jam
Battles

Time

I
am
Looking
No time to type 
No time to respond
Time is what I am fighting
Time is what I am trying to find
and 
it 
is 
here 
at
 the 
end
day
 that 
know 
I
 have
won
 all
 battles

I have smiled, I have laughed, I have loved, I am happy,
and 
I can do it all again tomorrow so I have won the time battle?!
(At This Time No Time Battle So Big It Can Not Wait Until Tomorrow)

9 comments:

  1. I enjoyed this poem (and its shape). I do think that you have described the universal BATTLE to find time in our lives. Sometimes we seem to win, sometimes we seem to lose. It IS good, however, to realize that there always IS tomorrow.

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  3. Rae, we are definitely on the same page--I like what you did, pointing out the important things--smiled, laughed, loved, am happy :-) Me too, have to keep that focus.Thank you for the reminder:-)

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  4. "I have smiled, I have laughed, I have loved, I am happy"...yes, I do think you have won! Enjoyed this Rae and your procrastination at the end made me smile too.

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  5. This is thoroughly delightful .... :-)

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  6. Oh the time battle--yes I can relate to this. What a good thought at the end! Thank you for posting.

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  7. There's always time to smile, laugh and love!

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  8. Love this ! and your formatting on this is sooooo cool. I agree totally that pink if for watermelons. Guess I need to catch you at midnight. LOL

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  9. I love the way this works and how you make it fit together. i can taste the emotion.

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