Battles
Time
I
am
Looking
No time to type
No time to respond
Time is what I am fighting
Time is what I am trying to find
and
it
is
here
at
the
end
day
that
I
know
I
have
won
all
battles
I have smiled, I have laughed, I have loved, I am happy,
and
I can do it all again tomorrow so I have won the time battle?!
(At This Time No Time Battle So Big It Can Not Wait Until Tomorrow)
I enjoyed this poem (and its shape). I do think that you have described the universal BATTLE to find time in our lives. Sometimes we seem to win, sometimes we seem to lose. It IS good, however, to realize that there always IS tomorrow.
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ReplyDeleteRae, we are definitely on the same page--I like what you did, pointing out the important things--smiled, laughed, loved, am happy :-) Me too, have to keep that focus.Thank you for the reminder:-)
ReplyDelete"I have smiled, I have laughed, I have loved, I am happy"...yes, I do think you have won! Enjoyed this Rae and your procrastination at the end made me smile too.
ReplyDeleteThis is thoroughly delightful .... :-)
ReplyDeleteOh the time battle--yes I can relate to this. What a good thought at the end! Thank you for posting.
ReplyDeleteThere's always time to smile, laugh and love!
ReplyDeleteLove this ! and your formatting on this is sooooo cool. I agree totally that pink if for watermelons. Guess I need to catch you at midnight. LOL
ReplyDeleteI love the way this works and how you make it fit together. i can taste the emotion.
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