Poetry Jam
I
AM
I am here in my head and
heart
A small part...big part of
me
But I am here
I am here in my room with
my head on a pillow
A small place in my home
But comfortable and sleepy
I am here in my house and
home
A family living place
But part of a larger
family connection
I am here in a Rock River
town of Oregon
A historic place for sure
But connected now by
people and a river
I am in North Western
Illinois
A growing and middle
state
But one of many states in
this section
I am here in the Mid-West
of the USA
A urban and rural mix
But not North ,South ,East, or West at all
I am in the USA
A great place to live
But not the same in any
one region
I am here in North America
A continent like no other
But actually the same as
many in many ways
I am here as part of the
world
A big place to live...a
little place actually
But do we count the
universe as a whole
I am here part of the
whole of humanity
the universe
the world
a contaminant
a country
my state
my town
this home
this family
and
ME
I enjoyed the far reaching approach you took. I was raised in the mid-west .. Southern Illinois, a great place to be.
ReplyDeleteI have visited the west ease south and north but I live living here
DeleteI like how your poem opened with your "head and heart" and then moved progressively outward. Thanks for your visit at my blog. I think it's a great thing you did by moving closer to your Mom so she could be near her grand daughter and great grand son. I'm sure it brings her much happiness!
ReplyDeleteI had just finished the painting it may still be wet always suprized when the painting matches the prompt for the week
ReplyDeleteFirst of all, your painting is beautiful; and yes it definitely does seem to be perfect for the prompt. I really liked how you started out in your 'head' and went outward from there...starting with the small and going through the room, house, state, and ending in the universe. To me your poem showed not only how small an individual person is in the whole scheme of things, but (on the other hand) how important the ME is as well.
ReplyDeleteExcellent poem, Rae Ann! I enjoyed how you started with yourself before you broadened your perspective and then went back to yourself, step by step. I like the repetition at the beginning of each stanza, the positive mood and the overall form.
ReplyDeletewe are all part of a bigger whole...i think in realizing that we have the opportunity to do great things...that connection...i like how you went both big and small in examining your world....
ReplyDeleteSome times it is just your viewpoint. and that point rotates many times.
DeleteI like how you give us a moving in and out kind of view! I like the painting too. Thank you for posting!
ReplyDeleteI like how 'me' gets incorporated with the universe and then boldly stands alone...
ReplyDeleteWonderfully written, that connection the feeling of being part of the world and creation. Well done
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed your approach... lovely painting, too.
ReplyDeleteRae, Your painting is gorgeous! And a very clever approach to the prompt. For a minute I thought you were in going to go smaller and then you expanded :-) Beautiful!
ReplyDeleteAn interesting piece that I enjoyed reading.
ReplyDeleteThank you. Love love, Andrew. Bye.
A great expanding sphere of a poem, going from the great within to the great without. I enjoyed reading this.
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