Thursday, February 12, 2015

Quiet Noise

Poetry Jam
Scilence


oxymoron fun



Silent Grandkids
(Really?)  certainly unsure about that!

Controlled Chaos
(life in general)  Clearly confused

Confused Organization
(are you in my office?) A Fine Mess

Only Choice
(What!)  That is Clear as Mud

Noticeable Absence
(That is the silence again)  Mute Sound

Gentile Invasion
(not if is in my family) only Dynamic Stability

Random Order 
(Looking in my kitchen now?) Good Grief

Noticeable Absence
(Silence that is) Sound Of Silence?

Original Copy
(lost in the Organized Confusion) To find it Real Magic

Deafening Silence
this is

Seriously Funny!


16 comments:

  1. aww...seriously funny :)...wonderfully enjoyable lines...

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  2. ha. the world is seldom truly silent...the noise reminds us we are alive
    but the silence when we do get it...can be so refreshing...
    but too long and i would miss the noise...

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  3. Very cleverly composed!
    I like your form this week.

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  4. This made me smile. The clever layout stresses the point so well. Quiet kids/grandkids, time to worry!

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  5. Made me smile and very clever, such fun!!!

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  6. Oxymoronish fun. Smiles instead of seriousness --- nicely done!

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  7. It is the Oxymorons of life that make it so much fun, I feel... A poem at peace with what is, is how I see it :)

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  8. The cross linking is so aptly done...Humour weaved with wit. So nice!!

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  9. Such a fun write...and I love the photo! :-))

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  10. Lol! Lovely poem and beautiful pictures! :)

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  11. Nice take on the prompt, Rae. After reading through mostly melancholy poems this week, it was refreshing to read yours :-)

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  12. … this really tickles my funny bone. When true silence greets me, I feel as if my ears are ringing!

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  13. Loved your fun but real poem. Apt Oxymorons :)
    Can relate :)

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