Thursday, March 14, 2013

Clear As Mud


Poetry Jam
the second dance

DANCE With Me


ONE two three
DANCE with me
MOVE your feet
BACK and forth
PULL me close
PUSH me out
TURN a round
START a gain
MOVE your hips
MOVE your feet
HAND on me
PUSH and turn
ONE two three
MOVE your feet
HEAR the beat
FEEL me move
FAST this time
PUSH me out
NOW pull in
MOVE your feet
TO the beat
ONE two three
DON'T you see

CLEAR as mud you say?
WE covered the floor!
WAS it OK?
DO it more!

ONE two three
MOVE your feet
and repeat

smile

12 comments:

  1. Girl got the beat!

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    1. LOL A second dance with the beat...Some times trying to dance with someone that usually does not dance is a bit like herding cats. Fun but the movement is not very smooth like...... 1 2 3 ,move your feet, etc

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  2. You definitely have the beat! This took me straight to someone trying to teach dancing in a group! And it is so often as you say clear as mud!

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  3. You have the beat of the dance down pat. I felt as if I was pushed and pulled around the floor. Ha, I have had partners like that. Smiles!

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  4. I do hope you will be able to head around and comment on others' poetry. We all DO love comments, and truly it does not take a lot of time.

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  5. Relly enjoyed this, great feel and it got my feet tapping and shuffling.

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  6. Second dance and second chance...so right on that one

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  7. ha! This was fun...enjoyed the flow!

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  8. One, two, three --- the rhythm captured me!

    Nicely done!

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  9. and the beat goes on.....nicely done

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