Poetry Jam
BACKUP
Now
Back up the files
Store the information
Don t' loose anything
Save a copy
Down the hill
Back up the next
Savor the moment
Forget the work
Share a memory
Down with the backup
Save the downhill
Don't loose the moment
Store a memory
FLIP is a FLOP
Store
a memory
Don't
loose a moment
Save
the downhill
Down
with the backup
Share
a memory
Forget
the work
Saver
a moment
Back
up the next
Down
the hill
Save
a copy
Don't
loose anything
Store
the information
Back
up the files
Now
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Back Up
Breath
with me
Keep
moving
in
….understanding
the
upward direction
Stop...at
nothing
try
again to be uplifting
save
a smile...
share
a copy...fax the answer...save your work
No
blame for loss and no backup
God
has my back
the
ride is as it should be
not
problem free
just
live
in good hands
not
planned
enjoy
the ride
down
and …
back
up
FLIP UP
Back
up
down
and...
enjoy
the ride
not
planned
live
in good hands
just
not
problem free
the
ride as it should be
God
has my back
No
blame for loss and no backup
share
a copy...fax the answer....save your work
save
a smile
Try
again to be uplifting
stop...at
nothing
the
upward direction
in....understanding
keep
moving
breath
with me
You have really been playing with the idea of backward poetry, haven't you? I enjoyed the shifts in meanings from one poem to the next.
ReplyDeletenever thought to try thid before fun
DeleteI enjoyed the pictures and the way you worked with the backward concept. I liked the last stanza especially & the idea of traveling in an upward direction, and keeping moving on!
ReplyDeletesometimes movement is the only thing that keeps you from going backwards
Deletedef back up the files on the computer...cause you will lose them if you crash...done that...and all about trying to be uplifting, as i can...
ReplyDeletebackwards and back up can have different meanings.. This reverse of direction was fun
Deletevery interesting.....
ReplyDeleteI like how you shared your different versions... the last one was my favorite. Hope today is better for you.
ReplyDeleteI liked the second but not the first but published both. They seemed to come out with different meanings
DeleteI like your backwards poetry, it turned out well!
ReplyDeleteFYI..... this is Jena I love you mom!
DeleteInteresting poetry and your choice of pic is really adorable.
ReplyDeletepictures helped write the poem I think
DeleteThis really works with the pictures that really add to the words. Well Done
ReplyDeleteThanks,,,not the best but a try all the same
DeleteYou had fun with this... and the message for me? is to LIVE, take time to back up and enjoy life! Love this.
ReplyDeleteYes I had fun something new for me to try
Deleteand the wonderful photos help put me there :)
ReplyDeletePhotos were there in my mind and camera before the words
DeleteThe photos and the text had me going up and down, rolling with the hills--very fun! and wise--love how that phrase came out--enjoy the trip not planned :-)
ReplyDeleteLife may be up and down but both ways and backwards from the plan can be just perfect in the long run
DeleteThis is my reply...not sure if its coming out in the right place--my life has been off plan since I was 24, and I'm so thankful :-)
ReplyDeletePLAN?...what plan, well maybe a series of goals and ideas.
ReplyDelete