Poetry Jam
Rain
H20
Rain
drop drop
drop drop drop
I love the smell
of rain in the air
the smell of air
as drops fall
from the
sky
rain
rain go
away there
are now children dancing
who want to in the rain
play... now
that is fun
drop but to bike
stop in the rain
is wet
cold
uck
but
with
no rain
the wind
blows the soil
the land is to dry
and we look up
wishing the
sky would
cry
think
there really
must be a mix
that can fix the
dry and wet
yet ....no
it is just
as the
H20
is
perfect
as can be
drip drip drip
we do not rule the
sky wind or rain
it is just so
that we
want
to
complane
explain. retain
controll of all
and that
is not
at all
how
a
rain
storm
dust storm
desert or forest
puddle or creak
will let us rule
we can not
do... nuch
but enjoy
the H2
000
00
0
So
dance
in all the
rain drops
now
Love this shape poem....clever !
ReplyDeletevery cool concrete shape poem rae
ReplyDeleteOh, i agree....to bike in the rain is torture. I liked your creativity with the shapes & the poem in each droplet!
ReplyDeleteP.S. Hi Rae, I hope this week you will visit others. You have linked & not visited others for the past few weeks. We all like visits from others, and I know I myself eventually stop visiting those who aren't reciprocal....as do others.
ReplyDeletenice layout...
ReplyDeleteThis is enchanting ....
ReplyDeleteLove you drops of poems, Rae Ann... and I'm sure you've biked through lots of rain (unlike me). = )
ReplyDeletelove the format and the way you make this flow, it makes you want to rush out a feel the rain
ReplyDeleteI so love the raindrops of words all down the page. So cool!
ReplyDeleteInteresting visual
ReplyDeleteI like the short stanzas in this shape poem. Like rain drops--separate but connected to the rain storm.
ReplyDeletereally nice
ReplyDeletemuch love...
Love it! It flows and splotches down the page and ends with a perfect bit of advice! Clever and smartly laid out!
ReplyDeletecool shape poem ~
ReplyDeleteI, too, love the smell of rain!
ReplyDeleteVery clever layout, Rae Ann! I too love the smell of rain after hot weather. It is indeed very special.
ReplyDeleteThis was fun! Good to read but also to look at! :-)
ReplyDeleteWow! Lovely and such a pictorial of raindrops!
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