Poetry Jam
ONE WORD FOR 2015
Star's Meditation: LISTEN
Listen See. Remember. Be.
The Stars know the best position
Without hesitation
The universe is wise
It hears the wind's cries
Without hesitation
They tell us to listen
(The painting is not at all finished but ......even as it is now
it fits the poem to the T)
Ah, the universe definitely listens to everything. It hears the wind's cries and undoubtedly our own!
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely painting in process! Hope to see it when it is completed. Smiles.
I love your painting, Rae Ann, and can definitely see how it would fit your words. I sometimes fear that the constant use of technology might cut off completely from the wisdom of nature.
ReplyDeleteOh my goodness, your painting is SO beautiful. Love the poem too!
ReplyDeleteWords, picture, perfect!
ReplyDeleteCreations calls out for us to listen, the pictures really make this come alive.
ReplyDeleteKeep listening! I, too, love the painting!
ReplyDelete"The Universe is wise" i agree;
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much love...
Wonderful rhyming sequence you have here because it really molds the poem together. Especially since a lot the keywords in this poem were the rhyming words themselves.
ReplyDelete'The stars know the best position'...don't we too? just need to listen to this little voice inside and your painting reflects the momentum...I love it very much! Thanks :)x
ReplyDeleteI was thinking about the sound waves that have been recorded from deep space while I read your piece ... that shush of sound that changes and morphs as it is slowed down and speeded up, that is mesmerizing and engaging, that begs explanation!
ReplyDeleteLove seeing your painting in process. Stars indeed tell us to listen even if there is no sound in space without atmosphere!
ReplyDeleteLove that painting!! And the stars of your poem too. I've been in "draw trees" mood lately. They are so wonderful. Look forward to seeing the completed painting too :-)
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