Poetry Jam
Hands
Mom…Put Your Hands
Put your hands on my shoulders
I will lift you up
Help you up
Hold you up
Keep you happy
Keep you healthy
Keep you up
With your hands on my shoulders
you
lift my spirits up
hold up my joy
keep my heart high
Your hands on my shoulders
you have my back
My hands on your back
I have your love
We create harmony with hands
Mothers care for babies
then
children care for mothers
then
I put my hand in my grandchild's
And
all is well with the hands
hearts are full
A loving touch of your life, beautiful.
ReplyDeletethanks
DeleteSo sweet and endearing. Is she your grandmother?
ReplyDeletethe photo is me and my mom
Deletemothers play an important role in out lives...and they keep giving their entire life...
ReplyDeleteso true
DeleteA woman in general play important roles, a mother , inspiring her daughter to be great mother, the grandmother,imparting knowledge. They just keep giving things part by part in return all they need is just some time with us.. Well written, poem!
ReplyDeletei just learned the prompt was hands then went to help mom and I said to her.... Mom put your hands ...and I knew what I wanted to write
DeleteLovely and I liked the photos too. A loving hand does so much.
ReplyDeleteThe world works best hand in hand
Delete'We create harmony with hands' ~ so true...and it goes always with love ~ happy photos x
ReplyDeleteAre you commenting on those people who have commented on your poem? I am still waiting for you to comment on mine from last week. Sigh.
ReplyDeleteI try to get to as much as possible with the time i have...a work in progress I guess
DeleteThe power of reaching out and grasping all that life holds. So much love in a touch. Well done.
ReplyDeleteMothers' hands are amazing. Loved the journey.
ReplyDeleteWell presented, hands which care us today, are taken care by us, the process is so cyclic.
ReplyDeleteLovely images in this poem, Rae. The special touch of a mother's hands is so well expressed.
ReplyDeleteLovely....
ReplyDeleteThe photos are cute too
Well written!!