Poetry Jam
Eyes
When Blind Eyes See
My life guide can not see
but she sees much more then me
She hears what others choose to see
and understands feelings as the key
Her use of words I’d trust with life
to know human and their strife
choose her sight over mine
understanding divine
eyes when closed
see through
to life’s
core
What a beautiful tribute to blind eyes that nevertheless see so much. thanks for posting this.
ReplyDelete"choose her sight over mine"...the line shows reverence to experiences..the poem is a wonderful tribute...
ReplyDeletenice concrete poem...the heart shape is a cool touch...
ReplyDeleteand seeing others as our mothers see us...that def is with
a heart of compassion...
Yes, blind eyes can see much. My mother had been blind too...so...I know.
ReplyDeleteas yes sight of the blind, nice tribute
ReplyDeletehave a good Wednesday
much love...
Overwhelming and incredibly touching ...
ReplyDeletebeautiful words and the heart of love really shines in this.
ReplyDeleteRae Ann...hey...are you going to visit THIS week?
ReplyDeleteYes, there are more ways of seeing than we remember.
ReplyDeleteThis is a poignant tribute to your mother.
ReplyDeletethat heart shape poem shows that those who can't see with eyes, see through heart, beautiful
ReplyDeleteLost In Her Eyes
Yes, indeed. We all need to close our eyes sometimes and try to see with our heart...
ReplyDeleteI don’t know how should I give you thanks! I am totally stunned by your article. You saved my time. Thanks a million for sharing this article.
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